Saturday, August 25, 2007

Bitter Sweet

A mysterious thing,
It landed on my doorstep.
At first glance t’was beautiful,
Its shining gold,
Captivating every eye.

But it was like a poisoned apple,
Beautiful on the outside,
But fatal in the depths.
It was a deceiver of truth, an enemy.

I knew of this danger,
For I was warned of its fate,
But it was too late,
For I had been lured by its divine evil,
Its beautiful pleasure,
And now a burden was mine to carry.

Its heavy weight drug me down,
And I thought I’d soon perish,
For its power was so strong,
Only by the strongest effort,
Could I go on.

Everyday my eyes grew dim,
No longer could I remember
The things once pure and good,
For another view so terrifying,
Tormented my tired eyes.

No more could I remember the fragrance of life,
No more could I taste sweetness on my lips.
All that was left was the stench of death,
My lips were parched, my mouth dry.

I knew the pain I had to bear,
The price I had to pay,
I knew the penalty that was mine,
The death that awaited me.

But then suddenly,
When the eye that saw all,
No longer gazed on my black heart,
And the weight on my shoulders,
No longer pressed down,
Someone else caught the focus
Of the all-seeing eye,
Another had drawn the righteous wrath away from me,
And took it upon himself.

But this other had done no wrong,
He had not been deceived,
Nor lured by evil.
His body had no mark of wickedness.

My eyes filled with tears,
In awe I stood.
For he had taken my blame,
And made me clean,
For he had released the burden.
And paid the price,
For he had died the death for me.



K.E.H

5 comments:

Hannah said...

Wow. Excellent poem, Karen. Did you write it?

I'm sorry I didn't get to talk to you more at Mitchell's party. I wanted to tell you-I got the Pride and Prejudice music book!! I'm totally psyched! I had a Borders gift card from my grandparents, so I bought that. It's so gorgeous...:sigh:.


See ya Sunday!
~Sarah~

lydia said...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Did you know that I love you and think you are amazing? Yup!! Cause you are!! ;-) Have a great time camping!! love ya!!

Thaddeus said...

Hey Kare, that was really good. I felt like that first part was my life. lol, you know what I mean, can't do a thing right it seems.

Anywho, thanks for posting that.

Good luck in all your adventures. ;)

Karen Elizabeth said...

Aw thanks guys!

Sarah-- yes, I did write it. That's awesome about the Pride and Prejudice music!! It's beautiful, and you are really good at it!

Lyd-- Thanks! Same to you b-day girl! I love you too!

Ted---Oh I am glad! I know exactly what you mean. ;-)Have an awesome week! :-)

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